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Fall's Beauty

Fall’s Beauty Shuffling through the leaves and grass Looking back on Autumn’s past Gazing at the dreary sky Watching nature take a sigh As we wait for winter’s blast And the trees and ground will rest We’ll enjoy fall’s awe and splendor And together we’ll surrender for the unveiling of the earth While the foliage will burst with a color scheme that’s grand And so fall, we will befriend With its dazzling majesty And together we will see That the glory of the season Gives us hope and every reason To revel in autumn’s path We’ll enjoy it while it lasts

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Skat A

Date: 10/27/2016 2:49:00 PM

Alona, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Alona Perlin
Date: 10/31/2016 1:50:00 PM

Hello, thank you. I received an e-mail saying that this poem will be featured this week. Do you have a "Featured Poetry" section? How can I see it? Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2016 3:02:00 PM

Alona,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Alona Perlin
Date: 10/31/2016 1:50:00 PM

Hello, thank you. I received an e-mail saying that this poem will be featured this week. Do you have a "Featured Poetry" section? How can I see it? Thank you.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/20/2016 10:41:00 PM

Outstanding.....Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/20/2016 2:32:00 PM

Beautiful! :)

Alona Perlin
Date: 10/31/2016 1:49:00 PM

Thank you so much!!