Falling Short

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childhood memories

daddy says get the lead out--

pencil tip shatters

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04/24/2019
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childhood memories daddy says get the lead out-- pencil tip shatters

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/14/2019 10:45:00 PM

Clever as ever. (I have similar memories, by the way). ~ gw

Mark Toney
Date: 5/15/2019 11:40:00 AM

Roger that, GW. Thank you for taking time to review several of my poems, and giving such encouraging comments! ~Mark

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/24/2019 11:22:00 AM

Mark..,how clever. Panagiota

Mark Toney
Date: 4/24/2019 1:06:00 PM

Panagiota, thank you for your kind encouragement :) Mark