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My poem 'Falling Light' explores the complexities of desire, temptation, and the conflict between passion and morality. 
 
Exploring the possibilities that some experiences, particularly those involving illicit love or intense attraction, can be both intoxicating and fraught with guilt.
 
 
 
You shouldn't know the colour of falling light As it descends into the abyss of passion. When limbs intertwine in sweet complete delight And the thin skin wraps the fiery flesh In the soothing caress of the conductor's hand Cris crossing and cutting the air afresh With his smooth effervescent and pulsating baton. You shouldn't know the colour of his seduction, His ragged jagged downward pointing chin, The tangled mangled wilderness of his beard, The forceful resourcefulness of his kisses, The colours of that fascinating rude tattoo. The feeling of injection and quick retraction, You shouldn't know the colour of his flame, Or the sound of his intoxicating and secret name You must somehow savour with hungry lust. Eyes rolling back as you inevitably fall It is all some God almighty magnetic rich taboo. His name, his eyes, the things you will recall In the lonely moments of night time longing, When you know it was all a dreadful act of wronging That must be forever pushed aside, inside, denied, Far away from the colour of the falling light. © Allen Ansell 2025

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