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Falling For You

Falling for You I made a wish to God one night I prayed with all my may, I wished with all my might That my first falling star to be seen with whomever Would be the “one” I was to be with forever That night came with you and I couldn’t believe Surely God was mistaken on what we agreed For that night whom I was with was my best friend Could this really someday be my husband? Never again did I see falling stars around anyone but you Surely by the third one I knew, god was trying to give me a clue I started this relationship to see if it was worthwhile And can’t believe here today we’re walking down the aisle All we have now starting from a wish and a prayer All our love we have for each other cannot compare Forever and always we’ll be together, I love you with all of my heart I’ll prove that to you today as we say… till death do us part. Thank you god for hearing my prayers and coming through I’ll vow my love to him forever and say I Do. By Jamie Ayala

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2016 12:16:00 PM
jamie ayala, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:27:00 PM
Jamie, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:28:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jamie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2011 3:01:00 PM
Nice expressions on the feelings of love, Jamie
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Date: 6/6/2011 12:13:00 AM
welcome here in the poetry soup...good luck//... ***** jun-jun
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:24:00 PM
Hello Jamie, wow! who would have known he was by your side all the time.. I see how you missed god's sign at first.. it happens to us when we are lost and in need.. I'm so happy for you... take care,..p.d.
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