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A marriage once in mint condition, now besmirched; fallen into decay Entangled in the meshes of infidelity; "other woman" leads husband astray Writing Challenge - Decay - Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by Constance LaFrance Date written: 09/23/2020

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Date: 10/2/2020 6:17:00 AM
- A great poem, Edward :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/2/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 9/29/2020 9:37:00 PM
Great imagery, Edward, how many woman do this type of flirtation to succeed in life and do not care who they hurt. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/29/2020 4:44:00 PM
A neat stanza, Edward. Congratulations on summarising the topic so succinctly.! Yes, the bounds are incredibly elastic these days. Most people watch content that's so unrealistic, then believe they should 'star' in their own sordid feature....
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/29/2020 8:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sigrid:-)
Date: 9/29/2020 1:52:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/29/2020 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged
Date: 9/23/2020 6:25:00 PM
Well said!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/23/2020 7:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-) I appreciate it.

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