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fair day tinkers came this morning out of the melting sun like a rainbow in a cloud of dust their caravans noisily come music swirled about them and women's ribbons flew in their coal black hair red roses still wet with the morning's dew rat tat tat on the pots and pans rat tat tat on their women too the village men stood stiffly 'round their faces glum mouths turned down when the tinkers came to town the village men burn with lusty fire for tinker girls are sweet but never closer could they come to the swiftly dancing feet 'round and 'round like Christmas tops skirts high above their waist willow withy women danced while their men they robbed the place rat tat tat on the pots and pans rat tat tat on their women too the village men stood stiffly 'round their faces glum mouths turned down when the tinkers came to town anxious to be off again fairy vaner ponies stamped flowing mane and tails held high they pranced around the camp now at dusk and shadows creep too the music all must yield not a blade has been disturbed across that empty field

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Date: 10/19/2017 12:24:00 PM
Such a cool, clever and creative poem, Patricia. It had me thoroughly engrossed from the start ... tinkers came this morning ... who doesn't like a bit of mystery in their reading cup of tea. I know I do. It was such a sweet, delicious read. Poetic diabetics like me gotta watch out for this kinda of rich, decadent creativity. Lol! But it is truly a jewel of a poem. Gypsies, tramps and thieves, baby. Pure poetry by a talented poetess. Love and more love always.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/19/2017 2:05:00 PM
thank you very much I too love to be carried away by what I am reading; to feel an integral part of the tale.
Date: 10/13/2017 8:14:00 PM
Great imagery! Conjures up all manner of colourful pictures...enjoyed this one - a lot, Patricia! Hope you are in good spirits. :) john
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:12:00 PM
Nice, Patricia. I like your playful side!!
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Date: 10/13/2017 9:51:00 AM
Gypsy lyrics...their nomadic lifestyle, with their " different ways.." A fascinating, rhythmic dance to this poem...you have captured their strange energy, and wily ways. Loved this, and the refrain is wonderful!
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Date: 10/13/2017 8:14:00 AM
Wow Patricia, the flow and dynamics of this write are incredible, you have written a masterful poem here my friend! What a glorious piece, so full of action and reaction within your illustrious poem! They all flowed nicely into the night, just like nothing ever happened! Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/13/2017 10:01:00 AM
Russell I am happy that you enjoyed this tale. Thank you.
Date: 10/13/2017 1:36:00 AM
Oh wow Patricia! You are allowed to call it Free Verse, but these are lyrics, no doubt about it :) And what lyrics, wonderful! That refrain, it's in my brain, I won't get that out of my head for a loooooong time!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/13/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Darren. It can be called a lyric if you like. I have such a clear picture in my mind.
Date: 10/12/2017 9:59:00 PM
What a fun write, Patricia. I felt like I was there xx
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Thvia.

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