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Faded

f a d e d  and jaded, complicated and aloof- I've been created and replicated,         with no living proof. I'm nothing but dilapidated, left alone and                 deteriorated. washed-out and colorless. few is more,                   nonetheless- shabby and faint a life full of complaint,           I must confess. disappearing into the night, eyes left blinded             by mere sight- crowded rooms with dissolving fabric, living a life so tragic. no wrongs can be made right, when your deteriorated- living a life so jaded and...                            ...f a d e d. January 10th, 2018

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Date: 1/11/2018 11:01:00 AM
Lovely poem, Eloquent as ever, love the form, Laura.
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Date: 1/10/2018 9:44:00 AM
Sometimes its a long time coming, a bit of sunshine in our lives. Brilliant rhyme Laura. Regards Tom
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Date: 1/10/2018 8:08:00 AM
It can be very lonely... and it can be not... Lovely descriptions and sentiments in your poem...All the best Laura
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