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Eyes Closed

Its a Marathon forgot to tie my laces, Ran for the finish line To get the trophy, Crossed the line to experience the other side, From escaping the void To being trapped in holes and knocking against poles, Hoping for hope... Wishing for a wish... Sleeping to dream... Day dreaming to envision... A life gained after a great loss, Lost a lot when I had everything. Dreams suspended in the air, Thoughts as wild winds Blowing to retrieve my desires, The perfect storm... Storming to ignite my spirit, Lifted high above, To discover the eye I never dreamed of seeing it So I was awake,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/31/2018 10:19:00 AM
My takeaway, having eyes doesn't assume you can see. Interesting piece, enjoyed.
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Date: 9/19/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thank you for understanding

Book: Shattered Sighs