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Poetic Form: Haiku
Inspired: 2024 July 15
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if absence make the heart grow fonder ~ presence make heart run better if you take money from high interest banks ~ make sure they know its a loan a dime a dozen are friends that back you ~ true friends a penny well-earned Humpty wall sitter Dumpty egg cracker ~ egghead scramled hard bootleg a penny face up bearers Midas Touch ~ penny face down ~ leave aground

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Date: 7/15/2024 4:09:00 PM
Aloha! I enjoyed to read this poem. I like the whole Haiku. it will be my fav. My friend Aloha! /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2024 10:09:00 AM
Aloha! I am glad i made you smile. aloha!/ Darlene/
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2024 10:41:00 PM
My thanks Darlene, I say with a smile, Aloha William

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