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I. Fold, crease, unfold, sheets of paper thin as possibility, a crisp white plea to gravity. Forty-five times, a cosmic origami building bridges from table to the moon. The mind dreams, unfurls dimensions from the flatness, each fold a petition of ascension. But reality, that quiet artisan, intervenes. Seven, eight, perhaps nine folds— the paper resists, its fibers tightening, a rebellion against a lunar destiny. The geometry of dreams collapses into the physics of limitation, a negotiation between ambition and restraint. II. Sated with the hunger of excess, we feast at counters where gluttony is a ritual, a rhapsody of indulgence. Plates piled high, offerings to the insatiable gods of appetite, mouths moving in a tempo of ingestion. Like a paper's rebellion against too much folding, the body, too, whispers its limits. Sometimes in tears, sometimes in laughter, but always in inevitability, the stomach's silent protest, a wall that even the voracious cannot breach. Eruption looms, a volcanic protest, or else the creeping weight, its own gravity pulling the body to a corporeal moon. III. From paper to body, from the moon to the food, all are tethered by the finite, implacable laws governing a universe of possibility. Fold and unfold, feast and decline, the trajectory of excess tempered by the ever-present specter of consequence.

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Date: 7/20/2024 3:39:00 PM
Interesting, Jaymee, I've been reading through many of your poems, and find them thoughtful, deep, and original, and especially thought provoking though, I'm sure I don't understand it all. Interesting look at limitations, exponential growth. Doing something on paper or in your mind doesn't mean you can do it in the world, I guess. Forever eating of folding. It reminds me of a chessboard with 1 grain on square 1, and doubling to square 2, etc.
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Date: 1/12/2024 10:13:00 AM
- What an excellent poem ... with deep emotions - Congratulations on top first place in the contest, Jaymee :) - hugs
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Date: 1/12/2024 5:24:00 AM
“Geometry of dreams “ you have a very creative way with phrasing thoughts and delivering what you want to in such a clever and artistic manner, the depth of this poem is truly soul stirring and moving and i loved the flow and the clever diction throughout! I am in awe inspired to try different metaphors after reading this excellent poem! And like charlotte said i love how you’ve formatted the poem too, congratulations on your well deserved win! This is a fave for me
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Date: 1/12/2024 3:46:00 AM
this is a very well written poem; it's deep, profound and flawless in its execution, and i like the way you've formatted it..such a talent..congrats on your 1st place win in my contest!
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Date: 1/12/2024 5:17:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Charlotte! It means a lot to me that you appreciate what I was trying to do here comparing the two pursuits. What is even better is that your encouragement inspires me to continue exploring different forms and formatting. Thanks again for the opportunity, and I'm thrilled to have participated in your contest!

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