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Exhibition In Memory

Abstracts hang: sterling silver frames, matted in motif, celebrating Artist. An exhibit, ten years old, collects dust, forcing recollection. The mortuary – Boyhood Curiosity. Mother: Naked. Stretched. Stiff. Grey. Tin baking dishes engulfed the counters. Great aunts and second cousins crowded our sofas. Somber chatter and pats on the head stung. Clasping my girl’s hand, I twisted my door knob quietly. Their chatter continued. I escaped into her for my first kiss: tear salt and cherry lip gloss. Tuna casserole and ambrosia slopped into lunch boxes. The cold steel of fresh cut key tapped on chest, pulled the string around my neck, leaving a rash. I walked into our empty house. The walls echoed. Odor from cold spiral ham replaced aroma of fresh cookies and oil paint. Art followed Artist. Canvases were laid on the autopsy table, framed for their wake. Dressed in their Dynamic Blue, Electric Lime and Habanero Red, the dirging dead hang on wall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/4/2008 6:19:00 PM
Very facinating writing! Keeps the reader entranced. Good job! Congratulations on being featured, well deserved!~ Carrie
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Date: 11/3/2008 8:07:00 AM
Interesting write. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2008 5:53:00 AM
Jacob congrats on your poetry being featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 11/3/2008 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Jacob. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured!
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:24:00 PM
The imagery paints a picture with words in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/2/2008 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations Jacob on "Exhibition in Memory" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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