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Excavator V Escalator

Excavator V Escalator Escalator, to the Top it puts Excavator rives and ruts; and it effectively undercuts! One is a symbol of Mirth Another; symbol of wrath and destruction of Earth! Escalator is a symbol or Fort Paradigm of Human effort the other; of bloody sport! But most, Irony of this Writ is that one is pretty neat While another is full if ****! So, in Life be a Detector of which is the Escalator and which is an Excavator! 17th Sept' 2013

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Date: 9/26/2013 3:05:00 PM
Another cleverly crafted piece. You have a wonderful and intriguing way with words. Only thing I noticed was "if shit" and I'm sure it was just a typo and you meant "of shit" (but correct me if I'm wrong). Anyway, again, I enjoyed this poem. Well done and kudos! :)
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Joseph Matose
Date: 9/27/2013 7:54:00 AM
Look, this is the killer line that I messed up. You're dead right! JM
Date: 9/18/2013 1:02:00 PM
Lol....omg so true. Like your style ty4sharing jm
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Joseph Matose
Date: 9/18/2013 10:37:00 PM
I'M A LITTLE BIT AFRAID OF HEIGHTS! I CONCEIVED THIS POEM WHILST ON AN ESCALATOR IN HAHARE. I WANTED TO TAKE MY MIND OFF THE FEAR FACTOR! THANKS CHERIE. LOVE YA! JM

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