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delightful palm oil puts orangutan at risk barren land of shame

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 7:46:00 AM

:( awww a sad and yet, I understand this poem on a high level. Very intriguing verse. Thanks for sharing. -JWE

Roy Pett
Date: 5/28/2018 9:29:00 AM

Hi JW, thank you so much for your very kind comment, I think the question I’m asking is, is our need more important than the lives of these wonderful animals? Thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/5/2018 2:11:00 AM

So sad that mankinds greed is driving some species' to extinction. Powerful haiku Roy. Tom.

Roy Pett
Date: 5/5/2018 5:11:00 AM

Thanks Tom, it is sad these wonderful creatures don’t harm anything yet we seem to have no regard for their safety or future, we as consumers must say enough is enough, thanks again for your support really appreciated. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/4/2018 5:52:00 PM

A strongly written Haiku. Well done Roy :)

Roy Pett
Date: 5/4/2018 6:09:00 PM

Thanks Heidi I hate to think that the orangutans habitat is destroyed because of our hunger for palm oil, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/4/2018 2:47:00 PM

Picture says it all Roy! A true barren land of shame. Kudos for depicting the sad truth.

Roy Pett
Date: 5/4/2018 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Vijay, our hunger for palm oil has to stop before the rain forests are totally decimated along with the magnificent animals habitat, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))