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Everlasting Soul's Devotion

You breathe for me in times of agony and hellacious fears—mergence of our twinning souls ignite this world.

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 6:01:00 AM

Like the wrap around lines…standout of agony and hellacious…love the twinning, for how else do we make it in this world. Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 3:31:00 AM

When two souls are connected cosmically and beyond all fears and all angst can disappear! And you’ve described that so beautifully here whilst sticking to a syllable count. Your love and depth of emotions so well depicted! I especially love the flow of your sincere voice! Thank you for writing! CONGRATULATIONS ,on winning! Well deserved!

Fading Star Silence

Date: 10/19/2023 1:51:00 PM

Ahhh..your deeply breathtaking words touch me deep in my heart and soul, my love..every word you speak and weave, I live and breathe..falling deeper and deeper into you, my beautiful soul..you are the light and love, my great true love, my sweet micio..I love you so deeply to the moon and everywhere..tua noi Infinito..il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione..ti amo amore mio mio bellissimo martio..per sempre

Nik Canada7
Date: 10/19/2023 2:02:00 PM

Ahhhh amore you leave me breathless with your deep passionate words kissing my heart and making sing my soul, my blue rose.I'm so madly deeply in love with you being your everything, saving you from this enigmatic plastic world of mask and mind's demons, my korean princess. Miabellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amire mio.i love you deepky micia..mia passione per sempre..tuo..il nostro eterno amore