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Evergreen

Ever refreshing to my being As the dew that fell on Hermon Bringing new life to the seared psyche of this particular earthly vermin Designed to be made in your image I regularly miss the mark Treating this momentous opportunity as little more than a lark What is your favorite color? It seems it might be green. All encompassing springing to life In scene after scene after scene I have wasted what you graciously offered I see this clearly now with aged eyes To know you and to love you an unfolding Eternal surprise Caught up in the minutia of being I allowed myself to lose sight With the time that remains me take these scales From my eyes relieve me please of this plight Evergreen life giving you have always been and always you will be Bring life anew to these dried bones to rejoice for all seeing to see Thank you for allowing this audience with you YOU who made all things Strike each day my hearts chord undampered by me fully ring

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Date: 2/24/2023 10:05:00 AM
You sent me immediately to my bible Gershon.Psalms 133:3.As the dew of Hermon ,and as the dew that decended upon the mountains of Zion for there the Lord commanded the blessing,even life evermore.Was afraid my memory had backfired.Maybe the weather has had a cycle that precedes our awareness and time or the vagaries of weather on high Is more complex than first appears.Either way I am glad to hear from you.So you actually looked upon it's slopes? Have a great day.Vickey.
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Date: 2/23/2023 7:28:00 PM
Gotta comment on that first couplet there... So, even in July, Mt. Hermon was covered with snow in 1977-78 when I used to view it in the early morning on the way out to the fields to work... Perhaps no snow anymore due to 'weather differences' ... I guess it's due to the due! ~ Dude
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