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Epochs of Perpetual Love

epochs drenched in pallets of yellow silhouettes, spanning lifetimes of forever I love you’s- seasons stretched in shades of crimson secrets, measuring time only with cups of hope- seconds and minutes saturated in forgiveness, cadence of memoirs released in adoring armor... for I am but a perpetual ghost, raptured inside what you love most- freedom rests in thoughts of our decree... eventide ascends for love's guarantee. Original contest: 2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 14 Contest judged: 2/1/2019 For the contest: NA re-run Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Date Written: July 21, 2018

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John Hamilton

Date: 6/27/2019 9:23:00 AM

Enjoyed this poem Laura but I see it won in another contest, not my criteria, guess I wasn't clear.

Lu Loo
Date: 7/1/2019 9:03:00 AM

Oops! I'm sorry. I guess I assumed you just meant any NA received.i shouldve asked you but my soupmail was down..again. Thank you for my placement! :)-luloo

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/31/2018 3:45:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 7/1/2019 9:03:00 AM

Thank you dear Line :):)-luloo

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/28/2018 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

L. J. Carber

Date: 7/26/2018 7:31:00 AM

Lovely, Laura, and I really like the last stanza-- congrats on your win.

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/25/2018 3:29:00 PM

Lovely thoughts of love wrapped in beautiful metaphors, Laura. Congratulations on your podium win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo
Date: 7/26/2018 6:47:00 AM

thank you sweet Sandra ;)-luloo

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/21/2018 6:41:00 PM

I just love this. Your poetry seems to speak to me.

Lu Loo
Date: 7/26/2018 6:47:00 AM

awww thank you Sunlite :)-luloo

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/21/2018 10:48:00 AM

very deep poem Laura, the days, the years, the seasons, the wishes, the understanding, the memories, the lifetime, all captured in this poem...a fav

Lu Loo
Date: 7/26/2018 6:46:00 AM

thank you sweet Frederic :)-luloo

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/21/2018 8:41:00 AM

"for I am but a withering perpetual ghost, raptured inside what you love most- freedom rests in thoughts of sublime, grains descend in a moment of time." Outstanding!

Lu Loo
Date: 7/26/2018 6:46:00 AM

thank you! :)-luloo