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Enough

Walk the beach with me today, and hold my hand, for I am lonely. Smiles are expensive, and I haven't enough money, for the down payment.

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Becca Teagan

Date: 8/15/2018 8:49:00 PM

This is really nice, in a sad way.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/16/2016 3:56:00 PM

tucker carwile jr, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/29/2016 1:23:00 AM

Enjoyed reading with the obvious grin...

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 3/26/2016 4:12:00 AM

Maybe only beauty is not enough for our beauty, but it could save the world-as a dreamer said...Congrat.Here is the relevance of the beautiful as play and festival of solitude.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 3/23/2016 5:58:00 PM

Gorgeous write.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/23/2016 3:26:00 PM

Ha ha, I like the humour in this one.

Old Buck

Date: 3/23/2016 2:02:00 PM

Tucker: You have no idea how much you helped me laugh today. I used to be paid to talk to people that were paid to listen. Now I'm retired and don't have the money to pay anyone, nobody want's to listen to me anymore. :o) Your poem reminded me of where I find myself today. Thanks for the laugh. oldbuck