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Enduring, Endearing Love

Endearing love, it flanks your lives - the key? two hearts with mercy's gift. Your hopes and dreams o’er flowed offspring’s dry banks to guarantee success and joy. Your children came to streams and drank for years devoid of thanks to thee. Still flowing freely, your water redeems enduring love long overdue. With grace - a cruise on us. You pick the time and place. May 6, 2017, edited June 5, 2017 to an ottava rima

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Date: 5/6/2017 10:14:00 PM
What a heart warming piece.
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Date: 5/7/2017 1:42:00 PM
thanks, Richard, still working a little on the meter. I appreciate your encouragement. Have a great day.

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