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Empty Delusions

luring oasis sweet source of refreshing life naught but a mirage 14/08/18 water themed haiku contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Lyric Man

Date: 8/15/2018 9:49:00 AM

Wow.. I loved this one. What a hook!

Wendy Watson
Date: 8/15/2018 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Lyric Man. I hoped that someone would see past the literal meaning!

John Lawless

Date: 8/14/2018 7:38:00 AM

very interesting take on the contest theme....so many things in life take on this same aura....well done Wendy

Wendy Watson
Date: 8/15/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, John. Things aren't always what they seem in life!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/14/2018 2:16:00 AM

This is a haiku gem Wendy, Good luck. Tom

Wendy Watson
Date: 8/15/2018 11:52:00 AM

Very kind, Tom. Thank you as always for the encouragement.