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Emotional Rain

Whenever a ginseng breeze blows, Tokyo tears fall in my heart — I have mountain village longings for distant her My lonely home sits below sea-level blue, my sabishi jia is sinking below cerulean water Butterfly images on the rice paper lantern softly sway ... gently I fall into a light sleep My dreams float in the night Szechuan sky, wishing for the clouds to cry I feel the famine embrace of my phantom sorumeito — My ghostly soulmate rests in the arms of another, leaving me with a dearth of barren gingko days ... only empty Yangtze pain The air I breathe remains dry, but my heart is flooded with emotional rain I’m drowning on the inside, overcome by a downpour of internal torrential weeping Overwhelmed by unabated emotional rain Heavy is my Chengdu heart ... swept to the depths of deep despair by tsunami waves of true love loss Never knew freedom would come with such a soul evaporating cost Didn’t realize being captive was such a joy, oh how I wish I was still kept in her heart As the morning sky starts to cry, the rain washes away the levee pride which my dry eyes used to hold back All the tears that had built up in my heart for too long Today, my emotional rain has washed me clean to the far shores of hope again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/20/2018 1:32:00 AM
Welcome to freedom. Great. Your poem (as always) has meaning beyond and above...It speaks to me. Is intelligent and full of depth and therefore filled with emotions. Keep up the good work. Kai
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Date: 1/26/2018 5:59:00 PM
Brilliant poem and great use of metaphor.. Reminds me of my rain series of poems..
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Date: 1/25/2018 2:52:00 PM
A Tokyo love affair...You are unique... All the best Freddie...All the best
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