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Eddy lives in the gullibility and cohesibility of a gritty city Between assimilability civility reality and triviality Here Eddy’s senility is merely an eligible technicality A wink of eccentricity fragility debility futility impossibility risibility Still under that mighty illusion of invincibility virility and viability Invisibility’s equivalent to gentility favouring stability and incredulity Eyes void of deceptibility infallibility predictability divisibility Eddy is still irresistibly witty with intelligibility bordering geniality The indelibility of his ability versus disability for agility and flexibility Gives Eddy eligibility admissibility accessibility feasibility visibility and divisibility Implicit credibility whimsicality spirituality frivolity and squeezability Eddy believes there’s no margin for self-pity when you own a pretty itty bitty kitty Submitted on March 25, 2018 to contest ALLITERATION POEM sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 4/3/2018 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, for much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/3/2018 7:45:00 AM
I agree with Judith. Many congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/2/2018 7:56:00 PM
How very cleverly written. I love this witty ditty Line :) Congratulations on your win!!! Best, Judy
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Date: 4/2/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Judy. Very appreciated.
Date: 4/1/2018 8:01:00 PM
Wouldn't want to read it aloud for an audience, although it was kind of fun here at home alone. Unique and unquestionably top rate work. Your placement honor well-deserved, Line.
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Reason. Those tongue twisters make a great party game though! Can't take ourselves too seriously.
Date: 4/1/2018 3:22:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/1/2018 2:55:00 PM
I really loved this one Line, great use of assonance and consonance, just a shame it did not have more alliteration, as it would have been in top place.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for This fun contest and your compliment. Most appreciated, SO.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:59:00 AM
I envy your mid and end alliteration ability! My mind is generally stuck at the beginning consonant level lol.
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Date: 3/26/2018 12:44:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Shadow.

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