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Echoing woes

Petals drenched in poison pearls of emerald envy, carefully placed objectives whilst adrift in my tears of realization Longing sorrowful souls among lilac lakes, buried deep into somber depths of tinkering procrastination Starving for ruby righteousness and pristine perfection, and yet still reaching towards a tilt heart searching desperately sunset embers Distinguishing luminescent authenticity among bittersweet endives drifts away with each cooling December Shall I pursue soft screams for kissed loving ethereal roses dazzled with enchanting sensations To float away from every twisted hazing hoax with every spoken whirling weapon - coated with fabrications

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Date: 10/22/2024 11:55:00 PM
I identify with your words. Many have incompleteness. You describe it well. For me, the tinkering procrastination has been holding me back. Thanks for the reminder.
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Date: 10/4/2024 7:27:00 AM
Dear P! What a wild ride through emotions! I love how you mix nature with feelings - those poison pearls and lilac lakes are well-inked. You've nailed that struggle between perfection and reality. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/1/2024 4:07:00 AM
May the only fabrications be that of your heart and soul's imagination, dear Peonie. Love your lore of Grace and Beauty dear, keep it up !
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Date: 9/27/2024 4:09:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, but sad- deep questions, unanswered
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Date: 9/26/2024 6:51:00 PM
Petals drenched in poison pearls of emerald envy… ethereal roses dazzled with enchanting sensations…nice imagery!
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