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Eagerness

Great eagerness in the pursuit of wealth, pleasure, or honor, cannot exist without sin. - Desiderius Erasmus Three rumbustious good friends Wealth, Pleasure and Power Took a break from their Busy lives and went to a forest To spend a free fun day together They were startled to see A hut, laid back, hidden In pristine green, a Flowing rivulet played harmonics As tall trees swayed just to breathe fresh air A wise couple lived there With eerie quietude - Truth and Happiness Little needs kept them away riches And Loss never crossed their path ever A heavenly retreat Yet, the hut's calmness choked The three merry friends Who left eagerly like hurried thieves While the couple felt safe and relieved

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Date: 6/18/2024 11:07:00 PM
So original ! The art of true poetry in my opinion is originality! You have captured the readers interest with such a fascinating tale. Well written, on topic and perfectly creative. Write on Sweet poet. Keep showing the world that true talent.
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Date: 6/19/2024 7:01:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am humbled by your appreciation of my poem, thank you for the blessings.
Date: 6/18/2024 10:50:00 PM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/18/2024 10:55:00 PM
Thank you dear poet. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement.

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