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Dysfunctional

Duty bound by family ties we feel a weighted anchor Yearning freedom as we’d like it to be Sinking into a catch 22 every time Frustrations get the better of us all Until we break and then make up Nothing seems to stop the cycle Consuming time we can’t get back Trying to fix what we think we must Irrational though it seems Our love runs deep within our roots Nothing can release us, only Acceptance Lets all accept we are Dysfunctional

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/17/2018 10:12:00 AM
...hey Laura, it has been said "our family put the "fun" in dysfunctional". I had to read this one just to see how you treated it in the Acrostic form. Nicely done..
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Laura Hay
Date: 1/17/2018 3:53:00 PM
I like that idea of 'fun'! Our family has loys of that too! Thanks for your lind comments John. Kind regards, Laura
Date: 1/17/2018 8:25:00 AM
Certainly not an uncommon thing... I like the presentation and your delivery...All the best Laura
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Laura Hay
Date: 1/17/2018 3:49:00 PM
I agree Arturo! Thank you also for your kind feedback. Much appreciated. Laura
Date: 1/17/2018 8:15:00 AM
I come from a dysfunctional family also.. Great acrostic..
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:48:00 PM
Id bet my mortgage that its the 'norm' ; ) . Thanks agaim for stopping by! Warm regards. Laura

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