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Dusk - a Rhyming Wave Poem

Dusk is asking, "please sun move on", please sun, move sun, move sun, move on! The stars saying, "Time you were gone", the stars, and moon await. The stars sparkle, moon shines bright, great, moon shines bright, shines bright, shines bright, great! Lovers paradise, true loves fate. Lovers finding passion. Truly engrossed in loves fashion, in loves, in loves, in loves fashion. For each full of wonder, passion. Each dusk, a new love, sworn. Dusk is asking, "please sun move on". For each dusk, new love sworn! 7/18/18 Dusk Or Dawn (New Poems Only) Poetry Contest, sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 7/18/2018 10:10:00 PM
Nicely composed Mick. All the best.
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Date: 7/18/2018 2:39:00 AM
Well written verse Mick, dusk and dawn, best times of day. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/18/2018 8:52:00 AM
Coolest at the moment that's for sure, thanks Tom Mick

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