Dry Goods Store '62

The scent of linen, Slacks, creams, leather. Mellow tunes. Soft muted bustle. We move promptly to our quest. In the purse, Mom’s hard won cash. ~ The shoe department... Always with my size and style. The well-groomed salesman, His warm charm sooths my unease At the cold chrome size device. ~ Brylcreem, tweed, Old Spice. Soft caring hands hold my feet. New shoes. Perfect fit. And now, such memories past Bring warm solace to my years.
* Reworked version submitted in tanka format.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/7/2022 7:09:00 PM
I know, everything was a charming adventure, when we were young...so nicely remembered and brought to mind for us to share. Had to read this one again. Thank you. Joe.
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Ken Rone
Date: 1/8/2022 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for the double Joe. Yes, aroma, taste, auditory reflection provide that magic carpet ride to the past, even some visuals like Xmas cookies; trees with green speckles in a foil-lined basket beckoning.
Date: 1/7/2022 10:02:00 AM
All goods can be grasped in this imagery-filled delight!
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Ken Rone
Date: 1/8/2022 4:30:00 PM
Yes, indelibly woven into the fabric of our lives. Thanks Kim (and congrats on your Anthology entries!!) - Ken
Date: 12/25/2021 2:47:00 AM
Very nice, Ken; well done. The revelry was a pleasant escape from our present riot. Great write!
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Date: 12/21/2021 8:07:00 AM
Hi Ken….. a beautiful poem. Enjoyed! Debx
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Ken Rone
Date: 12/21/2021 8:47:00 AM
It is so nice to see that you dropped in. I'm of a generation where those specific memories are sooo imprinted. In fact, at that very store, my 6th grade teacher workrd the evening shift in the men's/boy's department to help supplement his teachers salary. The times I encountered him there were awkward for the both of us....me because it was so out-of-context and he due to his financial constraint. - Ken
Date: 12/17/2021 8:40:00 PM
Beautifully written, Ken. Kudos to you. Write more for us her on the Soup.
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Ken Rone
Date: 1/8/2022 4:32:00 PM
Thanks Milt. I've been a Souper for nearly 11 months and ow much to your guidance and encouragement.
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