Drink From the Heavens

the full moon waxes framing starry-eyed lovers ~ champagne glasses raised

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/12/2019 8:48:00 PM

I just love the starry romance of your beautiful poem, Gershon, stirring both the emotions and the senses. Vivid imagery of love. Warmest wishes always my dear friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 5/12/2019 11:18:00 PM

Thank you, my dear friend Gershon, for your happy Mother’s Day wishes :))

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/12/2019 10:11:00 PM

Susan, your warm words stir MY heart and my emotions...Wishing you Happy Mother's Day, however applicable, and All The Best of Everything. ~ Gershon

W.A. Cholt

Date: 5/12/2019 6:17:00 PM

The scene is conjured up beautifully.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/12/2019 7:17:00 PM

Thank you for your encouraging comment. Nice to hear from you. Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/12/2019 4:45:00 PM

I am seeing those drinks. Champagne I believe. Nice Haiku.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/12/2019 7:17:00 PM

Champagne works. I was actually picturing one of those OLD Hamms Beer commercials, set over a sparkling northern lake by the glow of a full moon. (At least it could have been Miller, right?---the 'Champagne of bottled beer,' as it used to advertise itself...) ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2019 3:27:00 PM

Lovely, Gershom!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/12/2019 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/12/2019 2:14:00 PM

A lovely romantic interlude, sweetly put-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/12/2019 7:15:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement. I rarely achieve anything like 'romantic.' Appreciated greatly!! :) gw