Drifts

The wind blows them high Sun light smiles at perfection In their direction

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Deb M

Date: 3/28/2023 4:05:00 AM

Few words with such strong meaning A.S….love it! Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/28/2023 4:52:00 AM

<3 just appreciating what's right in front of me :) warmly A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 3/6/2023 10:37:00 AM

Hey, this is beautiful and amazing! Loved this haiku.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/6/2023 2:26:00 PM

Funny what a cup of coffee and a cold winter morning in Minnesota can bring out of you ;) I'm happy that you enjoyed it! A.S.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/4/2023 8:12:00 PM

Nice haiku. I enjoyed. Blessings

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/5/2023 5:59:00 AM

:) Anisha, Thank you! I have been reading your work as of late and find it very Soul warming. Thank you very much for the visit! Warmly A.S.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/2/2023 10:31:00 AM

Well-crafted haiku, AS. You conveyed a clear image of a blowing wind and a smiling sun. Good job

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/2/2023 10:34:00 AM

Thank you very much Sotto! Really good teachers develop really good students. Your wisdom is always appreciated. Regards A.S.