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Dreaming About You

Her mind Reveling like A sea of glass As a crystal Pondering As deep as a well With a satire way About her, with A touch of Babylon Love dwelling with Irresistible ways Sassy speech with Spirited walk Eyes rich and deep Blue as the ocean As two, two carat Diamonds sparkling Lips a deep ruby red Body UN-describable As I awake from the passed She stands in front of me Aged in years gray hair Unchanged through my eyes (Fiction mine split long ago lol)

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Date: 11/2/2019 2:14:00 PM
Hi Bobby, So you were dreaming about me ? In all seriousness this is well written poem. To have a love this would be amazing. I agree with Sandra, great last line:-) Alexis
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 2:40:00 PM
LOL, Yep!!! to funny my sweet friend
Date: 11/2/2019 7:47:00 AM
you really need to stop this now... hahaha.. just kidding... nice poem.. of course, I am not a shee either...
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 7:53:00 AM
LOL, you do have a sense of humor my friend, almost as good as W.W. Thank you once more!!
Date: 11/2/2019 7:42:00 AM
beautiful penning Bobby...you describe her well, love the end...age should not distance love, age should strengthen it in my opinion...well at least how my mind views love... hugs
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Sandra!!

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