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Dreaming “Dreamlike”, I slipped deeper into an “imaginary” place - A strange, silent, brooding, “surreal” castle, Built into the side of a mountain in a land of perpetual snows, And lighted only by “hazy”, flickering torches. Deep into the “shadowy”, towering nimbus of Doubt, depression, despair, That dogged my every step. Floating in “unreal” picture frames, I travelled “trancelike” in search of Taktsang, And the Tiger’s Nest, Where I was told serenity and happiness abide. Later, awakening to the sound of prayer wheels, The sun had crested. A shaven, monk in a saffron, “ethereal” robe, Who has nothing, but has no need of anything, Presented me with a chalice of fragrant tea Infused with peace, that transfigured my soul. May 28, 2021 Contest: Writing Prompt – Dreamlike – Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 6/28/2021 10:49:00 PM
Rich imagery riding on the wings of dreamlike sequence, and the result is a well-deserved win, congrats
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David Holmes
Date: 6/30/2021 11:10:00 AM
Aniruddha - thank you - I enjoyed working on this poem for the contest. I appreciate you taking the time to send me a comment - David
Date: 6/17/2021 2:50:00 AM
David, I've just come across this poem and felt I was there in Bhutan drinking the fragrant tea. I've said it before but your ability to transport the reader to a place through your words and imagery are enviable. Cheers - Gary
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David Holmes
Date: 6/23/2021 2:20:00 PM
Dear Gary - thank you for your note. Words enrich our lives and provide wonderful sustenance. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work. David
Date: 6/2/2021 10:35:00 PM
David, great imagery and feeling. Congratulations on your win, David. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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David Holmes
Date: 6/3/2021 1:11:00 PM
Eve - back at you - congratulations on your win too! Thank you for your comments - am glad you enjoyed reading, as I really enjoyed this contest - warm wishes to you too. David
Date: 6/2/2021 2:33:00 PM
David, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, peace - Constance
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David Holmes
Date: 6/3/2021 1:08:00 PM
Constance - thank you so much. I really enjoyed your contest and appreciate your comments and for choosing my poem - David
Date: 6/2/2021 11:55:00 AM
Good Dream. Congratulations!
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David Holmes
Date: 6/3/2021 1:11:00 PM
Christuraj - thank you for your comments - David

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