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Double Edged Sword

I cant take it anymore, This isn't what I've planed for! I was confident, saturated with ambition, I became lost, with no destination. I had it all, It got took all away; Joy,love and transparency, became nothing but sadness, hatred and ambiguity. I loved the way it was, but it was never Okey, Okey for adapting to facing indignity with respectability. However Seeking change, Is a double edged sword challenge; A halt caused by fearfulness, or a motive stimulated by persistence; To shrink and deteriorate, to rise and pullulate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/25/2016 11:50:00 PM
Naamani Badih, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Naamani Badih
Date: 4/21/2016 12:58:00 PM
Tyvm Linda, This means a lot to me:)
Date: 1/4/2016 12:48:00 PM
Naamani, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Naamani Badih
Date: 4/21/2016 12:58:00 PM
:))
Date: 1/16/2015 10:02:00 AM
Very nice pen ! I enjoyed reading your Double edge sword, dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs!xxxx D. ^O^""
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Naamani Badih
Date: 4/21/2016 12:57:00 PM
Ty for your feedback :)

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