DOOLEY'S DEVIL'S DELIGHT

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Darling Dolly liked to dawdle down past Dooley’s Deli. Darling Dolly didn’t dabble in Dooley’s Devil’s Delight. Devil’s Delight, a donut dessert, didn’t do it for Dolly. Darling Dolly didn’t delight in Dooley’s donut dessert. So Darling Dolly dawdled home without Dooley’s Devil’s Delight.

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Terry Miller

Date: 11/12/2024 1:30:00 AM

Brilliant alliteration, congratulations

Kahlani Steele
Date: 11/12/2024 1:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Terry, for your kind words.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/17/2024 9:11:00 PM

Sounds yummy - could it be she was gluten intolerant that's why she couldn't have the donuts? Lol. Maria

Kahlani Steele
Date: 10/17/2024 10:33:00 PM

Well, that would explain why the donut dessert didn't do it for Dolly! Nice observation.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/14/2024 12:31:00 AM

Coming back to read after clicking your avatar on my poem and found this fantastic rhyme poem in alliterations. This is soo good and I'm sure children will love this as much as I do. Thanks for sharing and good luck my dear poet friend. Hugs

Kahlani Steele
Date: 10/14/2024 4:23:00 AM

Thank you, Len. I'm an early childhood teacher, but even big people are allowed to enjoy alliteration poetry!