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Don'T Worry

Dad, should we close the window before night? Friends told, ghosts come after midnight church bell. Though I've not seen ghosts, but friends understand ghosts’ arrival in rooms, how they can tell? Friends say, they hear ghosts' whisper, but no yell; play with toys sitting on windowsill, slammed while leaving; friends complain their muscles ache, feel heavy, they are unable to stand. Dad, do ghost absorbs their strength, they can't stand? Friends hide colored pencils as ghosts do break; they feel, ghosts misplace items those weighed light; find room disorganized, wait for daybreak. Birds remind my friends, it’s time to awake; don't worry, ghosts stay away from the light. ~X~X~X~
Visayan splash This is a sonnet form invented and named by Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines. It is stanzaic, consisting of three quatrains and a couplet It is written in iambic pentameter. The rhyme scheme is: abcb bcdc cdad da Pasted from http://poetscollective.org/everysonnet/visayan-splash/ Thanks to Mr Lawrence Eberhart for the resource at Poets COLLECTIVE Site

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Date: 11/11/2021 8:58:00 PM
Thank you Darlene for your kind words. God bless you.
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Date: 11/11/2021 8:57:00 PM
Thank you Mystic Rose for your wise views. God bless you.
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Date: 11/11/2021 11:05:00 AM
Hello Pratap Roy, Some say ghost are real. Some people say they are not. I believe that some ghost stories are real. Blessing my friend.
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Date: 11/11/2021 3:32:00 AM
So many children live in fear when they are young only to find out as a grown up it was all a dark place and the light can dissipate most everything, given time :)
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