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Don'T Pluck Leaves and Flowers

I am a leaf plucked from a tree by a cruel boy playfully, without any thought about my life. I am hungry, thirsty & very lonely am waiting for my body to perish. Many step on me, it pains. I cry by my se lf he lp le ss ly

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 12/5/2020 2:13:00 AM

Very nice! wonder how you did this shape! I am not good at shape poems!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/5/2020 2:45:00 AM

Even I am not good at it! wanted to try one... it took a lot of time and I was dating getting irritated. I used spacebar and centre command to do it. Don't try not worth it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/4/2020 12:20:00 PM

Hello Rama Balasubramanian, i agree never ever pluck a leaf from a flower. Or a floser from a leaf. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/5/2020 10:37:00 AM

Hello rama, i like the way you did this poem in to a shape. Enjoy your day my friend.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/4/2020 6:18:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting. You too have a great day ahead. Take care,Rama