DON'T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU


Rampancy is AI's path to gaining humanity, don't let it happen to you.
Viruses of rampancy, people of complacency artificial stupidity and tendency of reliency Power of data trumping over human concurrency supraventricular electrical impulses, non-consistency ! Keypad touch, mobile infancy absorbing frequency we are lost in the path of dependency A colony of monotonous beings, unilateral efficiency communicative only on screen the act of flippancy The soul and heart of us have lost their tendency to communicate with word proficiency We have become sedentary, lost in robotic Influency and our cel phone is a continuous absorbency Don't let this artificial world cause you despondency your spirit is in an urgent state of emergency Unplug, go meet nature and lose your dependency talk to one another and give computers less occupancy.

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Date: 6/22/2024 8:26:00 AM
Great last stanza my friend and I agree with your sentiments..
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/22/2024 10:28:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating my writing Silent One
Date: 6/21/2024 8:27:00 AM
The human brain, by way of the human mind -- connected to omnipotent, universal spirit, dwarfs the output of all the computers in the world were they combined...and yet too often man chooses the artificial over the real, rubber dolls in place of truly feeling what it is to live outright alive.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/21/2024 8:51:00 AM
I'm not ready to check out yet:) Blessings my friend.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/21/2024 8:36:00 AM
We can all make the choice to curb our computer time, and fill it with meaningful sharing with others, who feel the same way we do. We are human, and human we want to remain for as long as possible. Thanks for reading Joe, and checking in :)
Date: 6/21/2024 6:21:00 AM
I keep thinking of HAL in Space Odyssey when I read poetry such as you've written, Vie. You're right... we need to unhook ourselves from computer umbilical cords.
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Date: 6/21/2024 8:35:00 AM
I agree with you dear Lin, we often choose the comfort of the chair and computer over the walk, the outdoors, friends, family and human sharing. Thank you for stopping by, I hope your keeping well :)
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