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He kicked a stone, looked at his feet but her eyes, he could not meet. He had lied, he was ashamed and her, yes her, he had blamed. Actions his, consequences too, for all that he had put her through. " Enough" she said " I am done. Off you go, Have your fun," Too late he knew what a fool he'd been when he had thought her response extreme. But love can die, with mistrust, with lies and now , he cannot meet her eyes.

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Date: 8/30/2020 11:04:00 AM
A powerful message, Francine. Can't blame him for leaving her. It's hard to look someone in the eyes when you've lied to them. Great writing! Hugs, Carolyn
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Francine Roberts
Date: 8/30/2020 11:06:00 AM
wrong way around Carolyn, he can't meet her eyes, he's the one who cheated
Date: 8/26/2020 5:53:00 PM
Embarrassment and shame succinctly expressed Francine.
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