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Don and Haley

there was a boy named don he never did anything wrong then one day he met haley who was a little bit shady they began to date their lives were filled with one day they decided to live amongest the so haley chopped off her head don was so depressed so he pressed a knife to neck and in a sec he sliced his throt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/11/2008 10:20:00 PM
boy you and old david do sure have a deal going on huh. this was the worse piece of trash I have read yet,
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Date: 9/11/2008 7:08:00 PM
Ahhh man you better be ok T-T love you too XD
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Date: 9/11/2008 6:42:00 PM
sorry for what? nothings your fault sweetie
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Date: 9/11/2008 6:19:00 PM
damn this is deep
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Date: 9/11/2008 4:07:00 PM
Alex, do not even say that!!!!
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Date: 9/11/2008 3:38:00 PM
this poem makes about as much sense, as i don't what. you need to learn how to write poetry.
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Date: 9/11/2008 2:55:00 PM
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