Do You Feel Lucky

an itch or a scratch may cause a nasty red rash or nice purple patch

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Gary Radice

Date: 11/4/2021 2:44:00 AM

Id have to ask myself a question first: Do I feel lucky? Well, do I? :) Your poems, David are always much more than just skin deep. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/4/2021 4:38:00 AM

Heya Gary, yeah this one is all about luck, and signs that may foresee it coming, people swear an itchy left palm is fortuitous, others don't believe a word, and perhaps just develop a rash from scratching at it, sometimes I wonder if fate is preordained, and just appears chaotic, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/2/2021 11:35:00 AM

Well then David Call me Rashly McNasty Scratch

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/2/2021 11:51:00 AM

Ok Christopher so I'm guessing no purple patch for you, best keep scratching away so,

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/1/2021 1:53:00 PM

I'll take my chance on the rash, beats looking into the barrel of a. 44 magnum lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/1/2021 2:28:00 PM

Lol, I'll go for the purple patch Tom, itchy left palm, leave Dirty Harry to his big guns, cheers David