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disintegrational

how else could I be breathed in dried to dust rather than seep as slop a wish to be cast on the wind settle on a ledge into a crevice where as orchid I'd grow— unseen, away from nesting birds I'll have a sea view or sense one whilst contemplating the overtures of time awaiting the hand that will crush me into form force my creation from almost nothing, into once more being

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David Kavanagh

Date: 10/11/2024 3:08:00 AM

Beautiful poetry Dilly, it’s a blessing and a curse, sometimes wish I was easily amused and not a deep thinker, Damn human intelligence for making us feel never quite the finished product, A fave from me because it deeply resonates and reflects the disintegrational human mind, brilliant, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/11/2024 3:31:00 AM

A fave, delightful! I thought I was heading into a poets wasteland only days ago. I look forward to when the poetry contests prompts fill up again as they enable so much more than just a winners page but help redirect the mind to write about other things. It's such a shame they have taken the beating they have.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/10/2024 6:12:00 PM

Biblical overtones? Made from clay? I like the personification. It brings the question, are we malleable and easily impressed, or are we fired into set minds?

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/10/2024 11:47:00 PM

It's all a mystery Hilda, this was the product of a late night cup of tea after driving 75 miles (over the course of the day) - so deep in thought yet not. I didn't question myself and just wrote what came. All I get is the cross over but can never fathom it.