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Young Willie wooed his girl at night And wed her in soft candlelight. Next morning when the sun was bright, Young Willie contemplated flight. By; Joyce Johnson For: By Candlelight contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/12/2012 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Joyce. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joyce! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:11:00 AM
LOL, yes, we were on the same page, as they say! Love it. Poor Willie... Many congrats on all your wins, Joyce : )
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Date: 3/10/2012 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win.Love it.
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Date: 3/10/2012 7:15:00 AM
short and sweet verse.........congrats on the placement.........~sashi
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:15:00 PM
Congrats, Joyce. Outstanding piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend and don't forget to Spring Ahead. God bless. luv and hugs, Ralphie
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:56:00 PM
congrats Joyce on an exciting win for unique words of candlelight wooing luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:26:00 AM
Well done Joyce, good luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/5/2012 12:38:00 PM
This is great, Joyce. I'm sure Russell will like this witty write. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:27:00 AM
What an enchanting write, Joyce. A beautiful depiction of human lust -a painful reality. -Mohammad
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