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Disasters

. See pain, hear dread sounds. Smell fear, taste adrenaline. Feel. Touch hurting hearts. Inspired by HG's "Miatsianna"

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Colleen Bono

Date: 2/1/2010 7:35:00 PM

Excellent write.Thank you for your comment.I got 9th place in the angels contest.Makes ya feel pretty good to see your name.Hope all is well with you.

John Freeman

Date: 2/1/2010 5:51:00 PM

You have described in a few words, just how it must have been for these people to go through this disaster Robert. Top notch accomplishment, my man. Sincerely, Moses

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/1/2010 2:21:00 PM

Robert, Your poem brought the pain of the people of Haiti to my mind in this moving poem. My daughter who is an army nurse wanted to go there, but was unable to. It would express well the feelings of any disaster. Very well written. Blessings, Connie

Date: 2/1/2010 1:28:00 PM

Love the beautiful message in the last sentence. Blessings to you for sharing your caring heart with us. Fitting poem considering the Haiti disaster. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Farah Chamma

Date: 2/1/2010 12:48:00 PM

A great Haiku...concise and beautiful... Always, Farah

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/1/2010 11:25:00 AM

It takes disasters sometimes to bring out the best in man. I am proud of all the good people out there. Thanks for your more than kind comments Robert.

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/1/2010 5:31:00 AM

Nice Haiku... Okay man, lay it on me... Why are you hating???HeHe....:].....:JP]