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Death's Silence

Pensive in death’s silence my mind’s eye searching for answers never revealed by mortal form -- An advanced soul encouraged by the moon & the cross unseen my essence wishing to crawl in a world of laymen Being exceptional is unacceptable In a dome of questions With answers Not -- Living in a sacred slumber I awake again to sleep . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/17/2009 2:11:00 PM
Ron, congrats on being featured this week!
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:36:00 AM
"Living in a sacred slumber I awake again to sleep . . ." interesting paradox at the end. Congratulations on being featured this week. Poetically yours, Iolanda
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Date: 5/16/2009 1:54:00 PM
Ron, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 5/12/2009 6:09:00 AM
"An advanced soul" This is juicy...gets the inner perspective going right away, and so much so I get lost. This is not a harsh criticism. I think the poem is super. Congrats. Love, daver
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ron. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2009 5:46:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about here. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2009 10:42:00 AM
Need to read this a few times, cause my brain cells are very slow today. You know I LOVE your work. No, I actually have not read your book yet - but I keep you close to my heart despite the fact that I am the worlds worst procrastinator. Life is so crazy lately and I will get to it and let you know when I do. Congrats my sweet friend on your featured poetry. Hope life is good for you. Hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/11/2009 8:25:00 AM
Congrats Ron on "Death's Silence" being featured. Vince
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