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In a chariot of fire in the sun blew a pale horse and pale rider’s last breath, and on your grave sing the owl and raven in the shadows of the valley of death. Where no graven image rise from its bones, only a cold wormwood wind on death row pipes through the rushes beyond the tombstones where time cut short above stood still below. But far more does sound a haunting in me as if your faint voice my ear passing through - and I trapped betwixt life and parody sit this day communing with God and you. Yet I fear death itself I shall not mourn when it comes to blow its pale hallow horn. Written: July 1995

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Date: 8/1/2024 12:30:00 PM
This is extremely great writing imo Keith! I'm super impressed and absolutely love this prophetic poem!!! I'm faving it! Xoxo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/2/2024 8:41:00 AM
Lol ;)
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 8/2/2024 3:18:00 AM
Thanks Crystol. I’m super impressed and absolutely love your comment. I’m faving it!
Date: 7/19/2024 8:23:00 AM
I like this outlook on death that has a predetermined message. The flow of words and story give resounding gravity. Thanks for such a gem.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2024 4:34:00 PM
Hilda, if you keep this up I’m going to have to give you a resounding hug. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 7/18/2024 7:27:00 PM
Love the fearlessness, Keith. Faith and Strength, Gershon
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2024 4:20:00 AM
Just like Israel. Thanks Gershon. Cheers.
Date: 7/18/2024 12:46:00 PM
Hi Keith! How did I miss your new postings? So glad to know you are posting again! These words have the elegance of poetic artistry and the eloquence of faith. Love the last line! Sending blessings to you!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2024 4:19:00 AM
I’ve never been afraid of death, just dying. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings to you too.
Date: 7/18/2024 5:46:00 AM
Dang this is your best yet. I'm a fan of apocalyptic imagery and this is a top notcher.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/19/2024 4:16:00 AM
More prophetic maybe than apocalyptic but thanks again.
Date: 7/18/2024 4:16:00 AM
a darkly solemn right Keith
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/18/2024 4:25:00 AM
Cheers John. Hope all is well.

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