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Dead Guilt

"The waking light, Finds a missing man And her wailing ending Yet the tears still ran. She trails her sobs Down her stair Across daylight pubs To what Sunny shares Underprivileged Sunny’s getting a bit Gloomy But Sunny’s gloomy getting a bit Boring for Girl-” *Sigh* “Right at the spine I felt the bones crunch beneath the Bloody tires of mine. And these sobs And rain And blood Down the drain”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 10:43:00 AM
Wow. Powerful. Babii (Name For Friends Lol Sorrii) Im Right Here With You. Peace <3 Boo Boo
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Date: 6/7/2009 11:58:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Saidah .Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/4/2009 10:18:00 AM
I hope I am not driving you crazy..but I am reading all your poetry and I have to comment. It seems you have had a very interesting and possibley traumatic life..Patricia
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Date: 5/23/2009 10:08:00 AM
sad my friend but theres hope dont give in to grief just remorse and live on
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Date: 5/22/2009 9:11:00 AM
Tragedy ... can be as sudden as the rain .... for what is our life but a gift dangling on a thread of faith ... a good poem.
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Date: 5/21/2009 4:24:00 PM
hmm... very interesting poem of saddness
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