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Every Knee Shall Bow

Every Knee Shall Bow

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Dashing, Ole' St Nick
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I've edited this poem several times,
and I wouldn't say I like doing that.
 
The writing and crafting of a poem!
 
Best of Wishes,
William
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Happy New Year, 2023, Everyone!
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I'm sending my love, And here's a hug too Wishing nothing but The absolute best for you. With love and esteem, We shall find our way Hoping, and waiting for Ole' St Nick Come and let's go play! There's rumbling up on the rooftop, And, the clatter was loud Can someone, please, go up there And have a look around. We, nestled in our beds, Dreaming of our dreams Sleep, my precious angels Under the moonlight's beam. Ole' St Nick was cloaked, waiting patiently, Then with this twinkle of his nose, he gave You can see Ole' St Nick out there Dashing across the nites sky; he raves! He'll be ringing, and singing, With glee in his voice, he shouts A Merry Christmas to All On, Dasher, on Dancer, on Prancer, and Vixen. And to All, Ho, Ho-Ho! On, Comet, Cupid, Donner, and Blitzen. To the North Pole, Rudolph! A Good Nite! To: John Darnell & Deb Kellison

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Date: 12/26/2022 12:26:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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William Darnell Sr.
Date: 12/29/2022 12:07:00 AM
In fact, I do get embarrassed when I do this too, but I've made minor changes to the poem. Not a good practice to get into! This version is better, I think. Best of Wishes, William
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William Darnell Sr.
Date: 12/28/2022 11:23:00 PM
Hello, Jeanette! Happy Holidays! Thank you. However, Jeanette, I had just seen this, but where it reads: `The clatter 'is' loud. "Should read; "The clatter 'was' loud." Whoops, Haha! I do appreciate you taking the time to visit and comment. I love it when people visit. Happy New Year! Best of Wishes, William

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