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Dark Desperation

Desperation, overwhelming the only sound is weeping, weeping, weeping Dark shadows o’er taking, suffocating feel it looming, looming, looming Tired and broken losing the battle tire, tired eyes seeping, seeping, seeping Tears, soft and hot down saddened cheeks slide onto heaving breasts, heart booming, booming, booming Remembering warmth security a myth for now there is only sleeping, sleeping, sleeping and weeping, weeping, weeping.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/1/2019 5:08:00 AM
wow really a beautiful poem penned ; would like to quote- Tears, soft and hot/ down saddened cheeks slide/ onto heaving breasts, heart/ booming, booming, booming..///
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Date: 9/21/2009 1:54:00 PM
Trudy, when i feel down - my perfect pick me up is my music and writing. I can write a poem about Roses's and Butterflies listening to AC/DC - strange mix yea! like i mentioned you will be you again>>James,x
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Date: 9/21/2009 12:47:00 PM
These are feelings to which I can relate, Trudy. When I'm "losing the battle," it sometimes help to write. I hate to think of you feeling so down. Please feel free to write to me anytime. I'm going to Soup Mail my email address to you. Today would have been my late Dad's birthday and I have just moved into his house. Memories are surrounding me. Sometimes it helps to share with a friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:53:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Trudy. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 1:16:00 PM
From heart mourning, comes a peace within, a heart felt poem, Good expressions. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/20/2009 10:12:00 AM
Can feel the rush of trears....streaming.... another from the heart poem, Trudy. ~ Carrie
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