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Dancing On Air

Winds whip 'cross wheat field sheaves float up, dancing on air ~ magic carpet ride June 04, 2020 Brian's Select 4 Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/6/2020 6:48:00 AM

Ah, delicately beautiful. Poetic.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/6/2020 10:43:00 PM

Thanks, Caren. Even I was pleased with this one. (So often, I can't even look at my writes a week later). Smiles, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/5/2020 1:05:00 PM

Lovely imagery of the sheaves dancing with the wind, so ethereal-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/5/2020 4:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, Michelle.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/4/2020 11:21:00 PM

wind- the string / inciter of dance / the leaves of nature ///

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/6/2020 10:44:00 PM

Thanks for your support, Mahtab! Cheers, Gershon