Dainty

dainty strands of bells lily of the valley fine tuned posted on September 11, 2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/12/2018 4:23:00 AM

Super poem; I can smell the scent; great pen, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:19:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/12/2018 2:06:00 AM

Heaven scent , Heaven sent. Very clever! Like it a lot!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:19:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Mark Peterson

Date: 9/11/2018 9:37:00 PM

You are exquisitely sparse in verbiage,?yet so delicate in your portrayal of common themes. What pleasure to read.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Mark.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/11/2018 8:42:00 PM

Exquisite and ethereal, Line.. great last line.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:20:00 AM

Thanks, Susan, for your lovely visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/11/2018 1:48:00 PM

Your wordsmithery always amazes me.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/11/2018 6:04:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Wendy Watson

Date: 9/11/2018 11:56:00 AM

What a clever play on words in the last line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/11/2018 11:58:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Wendy.