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Crooked Little Dreams

we dissolve… into the silence of time knots of death and water spreading the thick sleep of space and shadow perforations of night cold and shapeless kissing cool on the tongue that tilt into those crooked little dreams…we dissolve It is the drunk of autumn the smell of earth seeds wrapped in God where whips of fire shake into a lion red rage bending around us…through us disentangling our breath between the stark and pale light

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Date: 9/27/2024 6:38:00 PM
Powerful diction. "drunk of autumn" "seeds wrapped in God" even in the dark, it's amazing that we can see Him....I mean, maybe that's what I am getting between the lines, if your poem did not come out and say it....beautiful, raw talent of words
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 9/29/2024 7:51:00 PM
always a pleasure to read your thoughts, my deepest gratitude to you
Date: 9/24/2024 7:46:00 PM
" We dissolve into the silence of time" your writing and its unique complexity is breathtakingly good!.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 9/25/2024 7:44:00 AM
thank you for the kind remarks - have a great day