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Crists Rebuke

if you are with out sin then you are eve for the knowledge you seek destroys my world if you are without sin then you are adam letting him betray you with a kiss if you are without sin then you are cain for i your brother bleed by you hand if you are with out sin then so am i for i am a beast with ten horns and you are but my rider if you are without sin there is no sin judging without there say blinded by pride if you are without sin you are not god and have no power for god is all if you are without sin may sin be absoulved taking credit for what is gods

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Diane Christian

Date: 5/10/2009 5:49:00 AM

this is a great poem and inspirational, well penend my dear friend, God bless you from diane

Diane Christian

Date: 5/10/2009 5:48:00 AM

thanks John for your kind comments on my poem no crime, I appriciate what you say and thank you from the bottom of my heart, I feel like saying just smack them one but we as christians so we supposed to turn the other check it is hard but I think he wil hit back I am sure it will work out in the Long run thanks for your thoughts it means a lot, God bless you from diane

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/10/2009 4:39:00 AM

I don't know what inspired you to write this, but it produced a powerful and well written poem my friend. I enjoyed reading this :)